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Your aim of your short essay for your collage entrance exam is fixed.
You must appeal yourself as a person with enough ability to think and with enough solid motivation
for studying subjects in a college.
Because you do not meet your future professor for marriage in a collage,
you do not appeal your feelings and your impressions in the last sentence.
In a case of the last sentence with your feelings,
you say to professors, "I feel such, how about you?"
And you want them your entrance a collage because your feelings match scorer's feelings.
These situations are needed in a case of your romance or in cases of your job applications, I think.
But in a collage, you study about thoughts and logical thinking ways.
So I want you to mention your thought and its grounds logically.
And I want you to enter any collages after you can do that.
It is unhappy for you that a professor who will teach you is not present in a collage you entered.
You must research a professor and his study fields before you decide your future collage.
If you find him or her, you must show your wish to study with him or her by your essay.
Without this wish, you do not have any motivations to study in that collage.
You might select your collage by its name values.
But I recommend you to select your collage by a professor.
Your study in your collage is directly connected to your employment as a bachelor.
So your selection by a professor is more important than that by collage name values.
You must write down your thought and its grounds as one set sentences in your essay.
In a case that your and other's conclusions are the same without any your described grounds,
you are suspected that you copied his thinkings.
I wish you to glow up to showing your only thoughts clearly.
To write your grounds, you must start your discussions from your only experiences.
Your experiences are unique ones.
So you can go forward your discussions as your only solid discussion.
I saw many people who wrote thoughts with pre-established harmony as themselves thoughts.
I think they do not understand motifs and themes enough, so they failed to appeal themselves.
People who have ability, can easily find if you understand it or not.
So for them, your impression will become bad one, because they will think you copied fully others writings and thinkings.
Let's see this situation from the opposite side.
Your appeal shows that you have no your own idea and thinking about that.
So you have better show your thinkings by your own words.
When you are given a word limit, I think you are given a time for appealing yourself.
So you must practice writing sentences to write as deep matters as you can in the word limit.
There is no TV star who ends in 10 seconds, when they are given 30 seconds their appealing time.
<In Japanese edition, here I showed sentences without verbose expressions one by one.
But in English edition, I omit theses procedures.>
I wish my strategies help you.
Let's write and write more.
